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What makes for a Good title
gives the reader an idea of what the composition is about
Draws attention to pictures and audience interest
concise to the point
uses plain language or at least avoids specialized language or jargon

Built Environment Analysis as a good title for

“A Study of Atlanta”

Draw on the thesis for title of analysis writing
what region part of the city
the whole city of Atlanta: to further specify the title to the reader

be more general before the colon, then the specific elements after
begin to make your argument from within the site draw the reader in.

peek your audience into

The title should set you apart from another similar paper.

Atlanta Underground Rock
Atlanta relationship to the natural environment
how nature influence the built environment in Atlanta
Atlanta Underground: Rock

When forth Ward grew out a discussion of gentrification in Atlanta ‘s most famous historic district

What makes a good introduction?
let the audience know what the thesis is about
tells us why we should care (piqued audience interest)
begin with a striking example or anecdote
identify some relevant and persuasive statistics that help audience understanding the magnitude of the problem or issue
identify an opportunity for action related tot issue that is happening right now or in the near future (elections, pending legislation, rallies etc.)
Describes the points of view on a disputed issue
define essential or key terms
Provide a roadmap or overview of the author’s argument

Introduction to Built Environment Analysis – outline

Atlanta Underground: Rocks like Granite, Jackson, and Stone

What are the hidden cost of our environmental, recreational activities

Attributes of tone Mountain
Sightseeing attraction
Confederate generals
visible for a fare
mad of granite – mining
Geologic attraction and information
ecological haven for birds and animals
protected animal space – BE

affluent district
upward mobility – new business development and industry
small town motif
multi-cultural community

History of racist behavior
KKK headquarters – meetings, rallies,
started off as a Christian organization
segregationalist
anti-semantic behavior
attacks on African American communities

Confederate flag – civil war, flag come from???????
Fought the north to maintain slavery – but really about economics.  The slave made money for the south and wanted to keep like that.  The North used industrialization to abolish slavery.  South resisted industrialization and opted to keep slavery as the most economical method of industry.

The slave had to be kept in line and not be allowed to idealize the concept of freedom from industrialization, so the Klu Klux Klan was formed to brutalize and terrorize American (African) communities.

Where’s the Black Wok?

Built Environment relationships that demonstrate a covert effort to disenfranchise the a specific American group.  The are documents, legislation, doctrine, and laws specifically written in design to limit, prohibit, exclude and disenfranchise a specific group of Americans (Maryland).

This document is written from an informational point of view.  The information provided is a personal point of view and should not be mistaken as an unbiased position.  So often the victim is asked to rationalize the aggressors motivation for their actions.  To speak for all Americans is factious, to speak for American Africans because I am one, it is ridiculous.  To perceive that information organized in a particular manner would influence the conspired effort to dehumanize some Amercans is ludicrous.

Where’s the Black Wok?

Built Environment in the context of a conspired effort to exclude, prohibit, limit and disenfranchise a specific group of Americans is well documented.  The data collected reflect the result of this conspired effort.  The covert racist behavior extends to all aspects of daily life for the initiator and the recipient.  For the recipient daily life starts with expectations of exclusion, limit, and prohibition everywhere.  For the initiator daily life start… No Data.
The point of and the stories tell how the effects have devastated some population anywhere, somewhere.  When the story tells about the psychosis of the initiators and supporters who conspire to continue the aggression and exposes the results of this research.

Where’s the Black Wok?

Built Environment bigger picture of the methods used to influence and manipulate a broad group of Americans.  In this example, the influence includes ethnic groups and others through advertising and information control for example.  The television and internet are the current mainstream access to the target audience.

Where’s the Black Wok?

Built Environment includes how we interact with our environment.  The Stone Mountain Park offers recreation and natural environment exposure.

The Stone Mountain Park offers recreation and natural environment exposure.
Attributes of tone Mountain
Sightseeing attraction
Confederate generals
visible for a fare
mad of granite – mining
Geologic attraction and information
an ecological haven for birds and animals
protected animal space – BE

Where’s the Black Wok?

Built Environment and the resident of Stone Mountain
affluent district
upward mobility – new business development and industry
small town motif
multi-cultural community

Where’s the Black Wok?
Where’s the Black Wok, Where’s the Black Town, Where’s the Black Wall Street, Where’s the Rosewood community, Where’s the community development, Where’s the Affirmative Action, Where’s the A-1 Schools, Where’s the Superior Healthcare, Where’s the equal pay for equal work, Where’s the constitutional justice, Where’s the 40 acres and a mull, and Where’s the Native Americans.