What makes a good title:

• proves audience curiosity draws the audience in
• gives readers an idea of your thesis , or at least a specific idea of the topic your thesis comments
• Is descriptive but concise

Does living in the city set children up for failure?

• To argumentative
• “Atlanta” instead of “This City”
• The pros and cons of growing Up In Atlanta- less focused on the negative
• Maybe inside the perimeter of Atlanta

What makes a good Introduction

• Has a hook
• Begin with a anecdote or really striking example
• A quote