I need a review with Kimberly. Here’s her post i evaluated http://sites.gsu.edu/koglesby6/built-environment-analysis/part-i-jackson-street-bridge-and-the-freedom-parkway/ . I told her get a little personal with it , like add her personal experience with it. And with mine she told me to prove where the stats came from, Show the negative effects of going to a school in the city, grammar, and change my last sentence of my intro into my first.