Today, I engaged in a peer review with Lyida. Her build environment analysis was about the benefits of attending a school in the city. She had an excellent well thought out idea. The advice I gave was to add the counter argument(negatives of attending a city – based school) and her rebuttal and to reread to check for grammar and sentence structure errors.
Lyida read my analysis and gave positive feedback. She also suggested that I add in why I chose Black Atlanta as my topic.