My space
My house is the most welcoming space for me. My mother being so creative, she designed our whole house. The walls are painted in dark gray and light gray. There are plenty of colorful paintings and pictures that are hung up all over the walls. And my favorite part are all the gold decals and extra decorations. I love being greeted by my mother’s warm smile. She cooks delicious meals almost every night. Me, my mother, sister, brother, and step father all sit at the dinner table when it’s time to eat and have silly conversations. My little brother is four years old and super silly. He loves to talk and play games and asks a bunch of questions. Seeing his little face lights up my day. One of my favorite parts of being at home is being able to go to my quiet place, which is my room. The walls are painted swimming pool blue which describes my personality, bright and friendly. My queen sized bed is so comfortable and my favorite place to take after school naps. My home is my favorite place to be in.
The writer of this post thinks of her place as her happy place. The fact that she describes her family as loving and silly is impossible to not bring a warm thought to a person’s mind. Family is also the writer values. Her family is what makes her space a place of comfort and serenity. Overall, I enjoyed reading this post. I can clearly picture a happy, goofy family and yet a relaxing setting from the writer’s description of her room.
The writer loves the space she is writing about and that is seen through her positive descriptive language and she uses the word favorite. She focuses a lot on the people who live in this home and how special they are to her. This connection is possibly important to her because they bring out something in her and she enjoys the feelings she is absorbed in. Overall the writer is giving the space a welcoming loving feeling. She is pulling you into the space.