As an open topic, reflecting on how  I did on my revised essay will make sense to me. Essay two was pretty challenging for my whole English 1102 Class. Although I made an A on the final essay 2, I wasn’t still satisfied because I wanted a high A. Therefore when Dr. Carowther, My English instructor gave us a second chance, I was like B-I-N-G-O. I used that chance productively, which gave me a higher A. On the other hand, revising an essay which consisted of adding, deleting, moving was a bit challenging because in my head and my eyes, I saw my final product as perfect although it wasn’t. But thanks to Dr. Crowther who added some comment on my paper to make it better.