On my project I wrote about my life, how I grow up, how was my childhood as a refugee, and how was our festival Dashain and Tihar. I also talked about the gander stereotype because, in my community, there are lots of differences between men and women. The main ideas were how girls did not have the rights as much as boys in my family. The hardest part of the essay is the resource part, where I have to make the map, videos, podcasts, and etc. The strengths of this essay were how my life was challenging when I came to America and I had an opportunity to study and work. I had a hard time writing what exactly I want to write and what resources I will make, and that is the essay’s weakness because I feel like I did not put enough information. I made notes to brainstorm and did the outline as well.
I was writing the ideas down on my paper so I can pick the one that is strong for my essay. I wrote down information that came to my mind as much as I can. I did not use lots of resources because most the things happening in our society while I was growing up so I think It was helpful when I was writing about how they treated men and women, and also when I was a little girl I would watch the movies, and I used to learn that how they used to treat women. I want to take my time and stop waste the time I have to work on my assignments without worrying about when it is due and I have to write to make it perfect or get a better grade. I will definitely do something different like do more like asking questions and organizing the ideas more.